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I was a teacher for 33 years. Writing was always the hardest and the most interesting thing to teach. When teaching writing, you feel more like a coach. I didn't presume that I was better at this thing...just older and more experienced. My job was to listen, to elicit what the writer's goals were, to provide suggestions (if desired), to provoke more thought. Ultimately, the writer had to work through the process.

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Recently a video by a 1990s, Washington DC-based band called Velocity Girl washed up in my YouTube subscription feed. When I delved into the reasons why a 30-year-old song had suddenly surfaced among the shark footage and the creepypasta greentext (purportedly true supernatural tales sketched out in disjointed sentences), I discovered that Sub Pop records were poised to re-release the first Velocity Girl record - Copacetic.

I like about half of Copacetic and find the other half irritating. The fifty-percent of the record that I do like, I like a great deal. The first song I heard from it - Crazy Town - seems to me fully-realised, in that it achieves what it sets out to do and I can't think of any way that it could be improved without upsetting the creative balance. Evidently the band disagree with me on this point as the reissue of Copacetic is an overhaul of the original mix; an attempt to present the songs as they wanted them to sound, while adhering to a 1990s aesthetic.

Copacetic was originally produced by Bob Weston. I like Weston. He keeps it real as an engineer and as a musician. In the promotional spiel for the reissue/remix of the album, the band diplomatically state that he did exactly what was asked of him and that it was their inexperience in the studio that resulted in the record falling short of their expectations. In the wake of reading this, I pondered the role of the record producer. It is one of those dark arts, I would think similar to teaching writing: There is a band/artist who has a creative vision, but who may be uncertain of how to get from A to B. It is possible that they cannot even articulate what they are trying to achieve, as it exists beyond words. In these cases, it is the job of the producer to identify what the artist is aiming for and to assist them in homing in on it.

Some producers are very hands on. Brian Eno's fingerprints are all over the albums he works on. I doubt that Coldplay would have made the leap of faith that was necessary to write 'Viva la Vida or Death and All His Friends' without his encouragement. They recorded an album that sounds like a cache of hitherto unknown William Blake poems set to music; songs that embody nativity, joy and hopefulness in a way that is almost religious.

Other producers are more hands off. Steve Albini, who died recently, regarded himself more as an engineer. He would meticulously set up the studio to best capture the sound of a band, but wouldn't directly involve himself in the creative process. He wouldn't stop a band from pursuing a bad idea, but he would make it very clear that he thought that it was a bad idea. Luke Haines, formerly of The Auteurs, recalled Albini's silent imitation of a hippie taking a long drag on a joint while a tossing a Frisbee, that he would enact whenever he felt that the band were veering off-course. This condemnation, delivered sarcastically through the medium of mime, was enough to rein them in.

When producers fail to understand what makes a band good, it can be an outright disaster. During the 1990s, there was a local metalcore band called Above All who seemed to be poised on the brink of success. I am not really into hardcore - a lot of it strikes me as performative rage underscored by metronomic finger-wagging. Having said that, I did like the energy of Above All's live shows. They signed to Roadrunner records which was huge. It should have been the beginning of a career. I remember listening to their over-produced first album and thinking 'they've blown it'. All of the rawness was gone. All that a producer needed to do with that band was get them riled up over the state of the world and then let them loose, and get as much of that energy down on tape as possible.

The thing that made me want to write novels was an offhand remark made by Henry Rollins regarding his book 'Get In the Van' - his account of touring with Black Flag during the 1980s. He said that, when he started assembling material for the book, he knew that, a year hence, he would still be working on it. I wanted that for myself; that big project. Also, by then I knew I wasn't going to make any headway in mainstream publishing. The only other option was to self-publish. I wrote a short novel about the spiritual journey of an atheist and released it through Amazon. In a month, with no planning or research, I wrote a 60,000 word espionage novel set in the Soviet Union of the 1980s. I wrote almost 300 pages of chapter and character notes for a novel concerning an African community in Hammersmith that is facing a crisis of leadership. I was about to begin writing it when I was temporarily kicked off of Amazon for reasons that remain unclear. Afterwards, I didn't have the heart to go back to the book.

At present I am eye-deep in a psychedelic pirate novel. It is a very ambitious story and I have certainly bitten off way more than I can chew. There is a massive cast of characters. On two occasions, the narrative pivots significantly. A few people might read it. However, the real value of a project to me lies in the process - the writing of it, the editing of it, the designing of the cover, the getting of it out into the real world.

On the wall of our home there is piece of framed Jesus-themed embroidery dating to 1882. It was stitched by a 13-year-old girl named Emma Cornish, who is a distant ancestor. According to our family tree, Emma died a spinster, which is where Jesus-themed embroidery will get you. Her needlework is probably the only remaining part of her left in this world. It is her statement that says 'this is who I was'. If a handful of over-ambitious paperback novels, of somewhat questionable quality, legally deposited in the British Library, are all that will remain of me long after I am gone, then I will be happy with that.

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